The Spirit Section

STORY BY STORY, part 2

by
Tom Heintjes

Johnny Marsten
The Black Queen's Army
Mr. Midnight
Eldas Thayer




"Johnny Marsten"
(June 30, 1940)

This [...] story shows a rapid maturation of approach and a temporary discarding of the pulpier elements that existed in the earliest Spirit stories for a more sentimental flavor. "Johnny Marsten" (June 30, 1940) is the first story that indicates that Eisner was getting a handle on the approach that would dominate the feature throughout its existence. As an important touchstone for Eisner, "Johnny Marsten" was the result of a maturing creative vision, one that knew readers would get far more from a story containing human emotions than one containing incessantly combative mesomorphs.

"I remember this story fondly, because I saw it as a creative risk that really paid off, and in fact led me to do more of this type of thing," Eisner said, noting that few comics heroes of his day, in either books or strips, showed a sensitive side. "There was a tendency to create heroes who never revealed their emotions, if they had any to reveal," Eisner said. "But to me, The Spirit as I conceived him did have an emotional side, and I was just beginning to bring it out with this story." Eisner was willing to take the risk because the story was appearing before a newspaper audience, which was older and generally more wellread than was the typical comicbook audience. "I figured the newspaper reader would tolerate a different approach to a story," Eisner said. "Over the years there had been so many different kinds of comic strips, so many approaches to telling a story, that I thought of this as another experiment with comics. Fortunately, it flew."

Eisner' s desire to create a hero who could fight with his head as well as his fists bore fruit in "Johnny Marsten." Demonstrating himself as something of a Renaissance man, The Spirit methodically cleans out gambling rings, breaking banks and skulls. "In my mind, he was a versatile character who was equally adept in any number of situations, and this was another manifestation of that," he said. "I liked the idea of the hero who could walk into a very foreign environment and take command."

The conclusion of "Johnny Marsten" is pure Eisner, with the crooks doublecrossing each other all over the place and The Spirit shedding a single tear as he learns of the happy ending. "This story moves fast because I had a lot to put in, and as a result it packs a punch, I think," he said. "On the same page that the criminals get brought to justice, you find out how Johnny' s story ended and you see The Spirit showing his human traits. Working with seven pages demanded this sort of treatment."

Artistically, Eisner was still experimenting with the startling viewpoints and panel structures that would underpin his career. On page 3 in the first panel of the middle tier, the gangster car speeds through a distorted arch with the panel borders serving as background design elements. On page 6, Eisner changes perspectives frequently and effectively, contributing to the effect of being in a car-chase. In the first panel, he arranges "windshields" around the target, and in the third panel the cars lurch at each other vertically. "I was trying to disorient the perspectives, because I thought it was a scene that required the reader to feel a little chaos. I don't know if I thought about it in those terms back then or if it just seemed like the 'right thing' to do, but it worked here."

"The Black Queen's Army"
(July 7, 1940)

"The Black Queen's Army" (July 7, 1940) is one of what Eisner considers his early failures. Maybe the plot was too bloated to fit into seven pages; maybe it was too preposterous. Maybe it was The Spirit's autoplane, which was perhaps the apotheosis of Eisner' s fascination with pulp paraphernalia. "The car was silly," Eisner said. "It had no real place in the strip, and I think The Spirit was not too fond of it either; I forced it on him. But at least I didn't force it for too long, and it was soon dropped."

Eisner said the story showed a young artist ambitiously overreaching, abandoning such niceties as plot. "I was biting off more than I could chew here, but I tried to make it work, that much is clear," he said.

It's interesting that Eisner brought back the character of the Black Queen, indicating that he intended to weave continuity into the stories. "I wanted to develop characters that readers would remember, so I could bring them back and have the readers already know something about them" he said. "I thought that with a newspaper audience, which is used to following characters in comic strips for years and years, that I would be able to do that. Ultimately, The Spirit was filled with characters who had long histories throughout the feature. The Black Queen is the first of these."

"Mr. Midnight"
(July 14, 1940)

In "Mr. Midnight" (July 14, 1940), Eisner gains a sure footing with a fast-paced tale that puts both The Spirit's brain and brawn through their paces. "This is the way I conceived The Spirit — a man who could think his way to a solution, but who could also get into a free-for-all and prevail," Eisner said. "And I was still emphasizing his ability to take all manner of beatings with no apparent ill effects."

Eisner fashioned the Mr. Midnight character as an amalgam of actors John Carradine and John Barrymore, whose work Eisner had enjoyed. The beginning of "Mr. Midnight" cements the relationship between The Spirit and Commissioner Dolan as one of mutual support and friendship. "Later, they kind of had more of an unspoken father-son relationship, but when I was refining the characters' relationships, as I was in this story, it was more of a mutually beneficial relationship, with the fact that they liked each other sort of a bonus," Eisner said.

Eisner, who had begun experimenting with a Japanese brush around this time, was still moving his "camera" all over the place to provide an array of angles and perspective distortions. "The brush I was using was slowing me down because I wasn't used to it, but I was really enjoying the art I was producing." Pages 6 and 7 show the frantic pace Eisner was able to achieve through the use of unusual angles and distances; the two pages flow rapidly, abetted by Eisner's spare dialogue. "I knew then that dialogue slowed down the action," he said, commenting on the tendency in superhero comic books to have protracted discourses during supposedly rapid-fire action, two opposing elements.

Also worthy of note in "Mr. Midnight" is the use of time, a favorite device of Eisner's. Indeed, the villain's own name signifies time. Page 2 contains the clock face, a visual cue Eisner refined over the years, with perhaps its best known use occurring in "Ten Minutes."

"Even though these stories were more intuitive than intellectual, I had worked in the field long enough to know there were certain limitations that had to be overcome on the comic book page, one of them being the illusion of time. How do you slow time down? How do you speed it up? I was trying to answer these questions, and this was one of my experiments."

"Eldas Thayer"
(July 21, 1940)

The Spirit becomes extralegal in "Eldas Thayer" (July 21, 1940). This aspect of the feature became important over the years, as several key stories hinged on Dolan's close association with the vigilante Spirit. Eisner got a lot of mileage over the years out of the fact that his hero wasn't a cop, a continuity thread that was carefully maintained with only a lapse or two, and those happening on someone else's watch. "This made the relationship between Dolan and The Spirit more complicated, which is one of the reasons I liked it," Eisner said.

Again in "Eldas Thayer," Eisner mines the pulp aspect of The Spirit that he eventually sloughed off. On page 4, The Spirit is shown working in his underground lab, surrounded by all the trappings of a scientist. And speaking of pulp, check out the suicide method that Thayer engineered on page 2 — did this guy read too many Rube Goldberg cartoons or what? Eisner knows his criminals — that much is certain from the bombmaking scene on page 7. Such bombs have actually been made and detonated by inmates in the way Eisner describes.

This story also shows Eisner's increasing dexterity at combining drama, action, and tongue-in-cheek humor. On page 6, while The Spirit is evading a massive police dragnet, Eisner shows two policemen tackling a decoy Spirit in a purely slapstick sequence, yet one that doesn't disrupt the flow of the scene's action. "I always thought that humor and action weren't mutually exclusive elements, and that humor could be used to leaven many scenes. This is an early manifestation of that belief," he said. "That was one of the great things about The Spirit, and indeed one of the things that convinced me to do it — the opportunity to try many of the things that I wanted. And if something didn't quite work out, as in the Black Queen story, I could always come back strong next week."

 


'The Spirit' and Spirit artwork TM and � Will Eisner Studios Inc. All rights reserved.
This article originally published in The Spirit: The Origin Years #2 (Kitchen Sink Press, July 1992)
Article � Tom Heintjes. All rights reserved. Reprinted with permission.

 

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